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Freebird Zee's avatar

Everyone has their style of narration and peculiar description, so I can't really critique. However, this is really nice❤️ Thumbs up!

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Hamirat.'s avatar

Thank you.

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AZEEZ ABIOLA Y's avatar

Try make it relatable!

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Hamirat.'s avatar

Ok.

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Freebird Zee's avatar

Everyone has their style of narration and peculiar description, so I can't really critique. However, this is really nice❤️ Thumbs up!

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